First 50 Words

April 30, 2008

Cookie Dough

Somehow cookie dough had become a test of her motherhood. She looked at the chocolate chip cookie dough, rife with uncooked eggs, and then at her 4 year old twins. Kelly, the bolder of the two, asked, “Can we have a bite?” and both sets of innocent brown eyes turned up to her, waiting.

She had to decide now, no deliberating. She hated decisions like that. Was she the kind of mom who let her kids eat raw eggs? Or was she the kind of mom who made them wait until the cookies came out of the oven, safely cooked to a germ-free perfection?

Please leave a comment with your first 50 words on the topic “cookie dough.”

April 29, 2008

I never dreamed

Filed under: Childhood memory, Essay, Writing prompt — first50 @ 7:38 am

I never dreamed I’d be a teacher. I didn’t want to do it, didn’t know anything about kids, and wasn’t sure I could even figure out things like which direction the Columbia River flowed for the basic geography lessons. But I started teaching anyway. I found I loved the kids, loved the teaching. Sometimes, I was even good at it. So I . . .

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April 28, 2008

Letter from Taos

Filed under: Writing prompt — first50 @ 6:02 am
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Preface: Natalie Goldberg’s latest book is “Old Friend from Far Away: The Practice of Writing Memoir.” I just attended a workshop with her about writing memoir. It was a new style workshop for her. It was two days in length. She usually holds a week-long workshop. It was in her home town, Taos, where a workshop with so many in attendance (almost 150 people attended) was a first. There were people from everywhere—many states and countries were represented.

Natalie taught writing practice, which she described early in her career in books like “Writing Down the Bones” and “Wild Mind.” Writing practice hasn’t changed. You write for 10 or 20 minutes. You read. You do it again. You don’t edit, cross out, worry about spelling, you just write. You do this every day. You show up and write. In addition to these basics, she helped us sit still, quiet our minds, move mindfully to quiet the mind. It was an inspirational and exciting experience for me and everyone I talked with.

She read us bits of memoirs as examples. One example was Richard Hugo’s “31 Letters and 13 Dreams.” This is the 10 minute writing practice I did after she read from Hugo’s book. It’s unedited. In ten minutes, I wrote more than 50 words. Breaking the rules today.

A Letter from Taos

I’m writing to you from Taos, where the dust from the dirt roads hangs in the air like clouds. Where the pollen on the juniper bushes is bright yellow and deceptively attractive. To the eye—not to the nose.

This is a writing workshop I’m attending here in the mountains. A place where many have come to sit before Natalie Goldberg and hear the rules of writing practice. Keep your hand moving. Find the details. Practice. The rules haven’t changed, but hearing Natalie say them makes them new and powerful. Hearing the way she speaks each word, says “write shit” like it is a blessing—that is the affirmation and the energy we came to receive.

I’ve lived most of my adult life in one place or another in New Mexico, but I haven’t been to Taos very often. It’s one of those soul filled places where real people lived before there were supermarkets and Blockbuster Videos. Where houses are made of earth and straw and a few drops of precious water. It’s a place where a mountain can represent a religion and a way of life, where spirits can dwell and look down on our human attempts at goodness and charity and love.

Modern Taos starts with the Sonic, the McDonalds, and extends to the end of the road where the Pueblo begins. Where the dry, dusty reality of Taos begins and ends. Where the wisdom of knowing how to live in harmony probably still exists, even as dark haired girls in tennis shoes walk down from the pueblo in restaurant uniforms to go to work.

Being here is like touching the vault of the sky. The sky is filled with the writers who are writing stories on the streaks of sunset light and in the stones of the desert.

Note: I’ve completed uploading all the photos I took to Flickr.

Please leave a comment with your first 50 words (or more, today) or the topic “letter from _______.”

April 26, 2008

The Workshop

Filed under: Writing prompt — first50 @ 6:31 pm

No time to post about the Natalie Goldberg workshop yet. We are busy doing writing practice, reading, slow walking, and sitting with our breath. I do have photos posted at Flickr from day one and day two.

April 25, 2008

Water

Filed under: Writing prompt — first50 @ 6:02 am

Netflix brought me Water, a story about widows in India in 1938. I can’t help seeing a connection between these oppressed women and the two characters in A Thousand Splendid Suns, which I just read. Oppressed in an impossible social context, these are stories about women who won’t take any action to save themselves, but will risk everything to save someone they love.

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April 24, 2008

Chicago

Filed under: Writing prompt, fiction — first50 @ 5:46 am

Living in the hills surrounded by nothing but trees was perfect for her. She needed to be alone with herself. She needed time away from the world. Once a month she drove down the mountain and bought supplies and gasoline for her generator.

The generator was her tie to the world she wanted to process and understand, and eventually return to with enthusiasm. Each night she fired up the generator for a couple hours of electric light. But more importantly, she  needed to run the stereo. She needed to play one or another of her Chicago albums. Chicago was . . .

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April 23, 2008

Nice Neighborhood

Filed under: Writing prompt, fiction — first50 @ 6:31 am

“Ah,” she said, “this is a nice neighborhood.”

The realtor certainly didn’t want to disagree with that opinion, but she wondered what it meant. After all, they’d just turned the corner into the little neighborhood and she hadn’t even showed the house yet. “Why do you say that?” she asked.

“Well,” the potential buyer said, “I see people out walking and people in their yards. I like that. It means that people are active and that people take care of their homes.”

The realtor stored that away. A bit of knowledge about what would sell the house after she’d showed it. . . .

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April 22, 2008

Wolves

Filed under: Children's Writing Prompts, Essay, Opinion, Writing prompt — first50 @ 7:10 am

There will be wolves. Today as part of Earth Day, there will be wolves on display at Whole Foods. Wolves are huge, awesome and powerful. We could learn a lot from the wild predators. We are predators ourselves, a fact we manage to ignore very successfully most of the time. But when you look at the state of the predator in nature, you realize that the survival of the ecosystem depends on the health of the predator. Predators are big and easier to see and all the little growing and furry things that they depend on. . . .

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April 21, 2008

Come back

Filed under: Essay, Writing prompt, memories — first50 @ 6:21 am

Remember Shane from way back in ‘53? Sad woman begging handsome Alan Ladd to “come back, Shane.” Well, now I’m the sad woman, standing at the window watching the hummingbird feeder and crying “come back, hummers.”

The lore here in New Mexico is that the hummers arrive on Tax Day. Well April 15 came and went, birdy, and I haven’t seen a sign of you yet. Come back.

Please leave a comment with your first 50 words on the topic “come back.”

April 19, 2008

Breezy

Sandia crest 4

The radio weather girl said, “sunny and breezy.” In Harry’s mind, that meant he could go without a jacket. So he did.

He drove to Mike’s. They sat around for a while talking about what to do. Finally they decided to drive up to Sandia Crest and hike. Each of them grabbed a bottle of water.

It was about 20 degrees cooler at the crest, and the wind whipped them around at 40 miles per hour. Mike said, “Once we’re in the trees, the wind will die down.” They headed down a well-used trail along the crest. As they moved among the shadows of the trees, . . .

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