Set Them Free

Fizzy, sparkling, live, carbonated.
Bubbles just want to be free.
Unscrew the lid, hear the whoosh
Hope the overflow drips
On something it won’t harm.
Drink it down and wait
For the burp.

Please leave a comment with your first 50 words on the topic “set them free.”

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Writer and teacher who benefits from following the principles of writing practice set forth by Natalie Goldberg.
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One Response to Set Them Free

  1. becca says:

    Set them slaves free,
    Let them roam our land!
    We are brother throughout,
    hand in hand we shall stand!
    If color and pity will change our impression
    maybe it’s us, who need another blessin’!

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