Anybody need to stop?

I like riding with Grandpa better than with Dad. Dad never wants to stop – even if you are about to pee your pants. But Grandpa always asks if anybody needs to stop. Sometimes when we stop Grandpa gets everyone a soda or a candy bar, too. Dad always says he can’t afford to buy us junk food.

Please leave a comment with your first 50 words on the topic, “anybody need to stop?”

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Writer and teacher who benefits from following the principles of writing practice set forth by Natalie Goldberg.
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One Response to Anybody need to stop?

  1. Karlsruhe to Frankfort in an open-sided jeep. This delivery chilled me more than the near-blizzard conditions. I had my .45 but no S-2 courier’s pouch. Instead, seeming inappropriately uniformed as an E-6, a taciturn passenger who matched the journey’s frigid silence. I finally gave up asking, “Anybody need to stop?”

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