Strange

Everything about America seemed strange to her. The rush of the people, the rudeness, the unidentifiable food, the clothing. Most of all the women. They dressed so immodestly that it was frightening to even stand near them. She wondered why men weren’t driven to madness by the appearance of women in such attire, but they didn’t seem to notice. The ring of voices around her made no sense and . . .

Please leave a comment with your first 50 words on the topic “strange.”

Author: Virginia DeBolt

Writer and teacher who writes blogs about web education, writing practice, and pop culture.

6 thoughts on “Strange”

  1. In the early days of exploration
    in the center of the Mountain State
    there came a man named William Strange
    to claim his own estate.

    But he got confused and turned around
    and in crooked valleys lost his way.
    On a tree he carved these final words
    to mark his last and dying day:

    “Strange is my name,
    and I’m on a strange ground,
    and strange it is
    that I can’t be found”.

    (And this is a true story.)

  2. Community Spirit
    The house on the hill wer a queer place. That’s what the folks all say after church. Too many bad things ‘ad happened since they came. Old Luke ‘ad even lost his best cows. Why no one attended church even when the minister ‘ad called. The strangers had to go.

  3. @Granny Sue, I don’t know if you’ve ever followed the links back to John’s blog from his posts, but he does remarkable things with images for each of his posts. You can only see the images on his blog. Be sure to visit.

  4. Thanks and people always welcome. I also tend to post longer poems from my creative writing course. The short pieces are also a seedbank for longer stories that I tend not to post yet.

An open space for your story